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Hi Caroline !
Terrific resolutions:) I really hope you could keep it. With perseverance and discipline, I am sure you could. Thank you for answering. Good job !
Your English Angel,
Teacher MIA
Corrections :
Correct : I'm looking forward to having a splendid year.
This year I am graduating highschool and going to attend university. So I hope to make new friends and learn many things other than my major.
Correct :This year, I am graduating from highschool and going to attend university. I hope to make new friends and learn many things other than my major.
Correct :From 2012 December, I started going to the gym. I am planning to exercise regularly and I hope this works out well, till the end of the year.
And I hope to be a diligent person. I am planning to wake up early and read newspapers everyday hope I could manage my plan till the end of the month!
Correct :I hope to be a diligent person. I am planning to wake up early and read newspapers everyday. I hope I could manage my plan till the end of the month! |
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