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Dear Eun Heee,
Hi there! How are you? It is good to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words. Your new teacher, Teacher Jessica is a great one. You are in good hands. ^^
The weather here in Manila is crazy. It has been raining since. I really hope it would stop soon.
How are your students? I hope you are all fine. Take care of yourself. I also hope to talk to you in the future.
Never give up in studying English. You're good and I want you to be better. :)
Have a blissful day dear Eun Hee.
Your English Angel,
Teacher MIA
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CORRECTED SENTENCES:
Dear Mia..
Correct: Dear Mia,
Hi, Mia. How about you?
Correct: Hi Mia. How are you?
Where is the weather there now?
Correct: How is the weather now in your country?
I worried about you when it was Typhoon.
Correct: I was worried about you because of the typhoon.
When Mia teach me,Mia teacher was always kind.
Correct: You were always kind to me and taught me well.
It has been an amazing experience to spend time with you.
Correct: Studying with you has been an amazing experience.
Sure,I like Jessica too.
Correct: Sure I like Jessica too.
In fact, My students' time schedule was change suddenly because of a summer vacation.So I don't have say good-by.
Correct: My students' class schedule was suddenly changed because of summer vacation so I didn't have a chance to say good bye to you.
After several days we will get talked.
Correct: We will talk soon.
Any student will like you.Anyway,Mia teacher take care.^^
Correct: Any student will like you. Take care Mia.^^
Thank you. Mia teacher.. Have a blissful day.
Correct: Thank you Teacher Mia. Have a blissful day. |
2012-08-15 |
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