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Dear Mia..

Hi, Mia. How about you?
Where is the weather there now?
I worried about you when it was Typhoon.
When Mia teach me,Mia teacher was always kind.
It has been an amazing experience to spend time with you.
Sure,I like Jessica too.
In fact, My students' time schedule was change suddenly because of a summer vacation.So I don't have say good-by.
After several days we will get talked.
Any student will like you.Anyway,Mia teacher take care.^^
Thank you. Mia teacher.. Have a blissful day.
August14,Your student Eunhee..
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2012-08-14 ¿ÀÈÄ 7:27:44
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Mia Dear Eun Heee,

Hi there! How are you? It is good to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words. Your new teacher, Teacher Jessica is a great one. You are in good hands. ^^

The weather here in Manila is crazy. It has been raining since. I really hope it would stop soon.
How are your students? I hope you are all fine. Take care of yourself. I also hope to talk to you in the future.

Never give up in studying English. You're good and I want you to be better. :)

Have a blissful day dear Eun Hee.


Your English Angel,
Teacher MIA


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CORRECTED SENTENCES:


Dear Mia..
Correct: Dear Mia,

Hi, Mia. How about you?
Correct: Hi Mia. How are you?

Where is the weather there now?
Correct: How is the weather now in your country?

I worried about you when it was Typhoon.
Correct: I was worried about you because of the typhoon.

When Mia teach me,Mia teacher was always kind.
Correct: You were always kind to me and taught me well.

It has been an amazing experience to spend time with you.
Correct: Studying with you has been an amazing experience.

Sure,I like Jessica too.
Correct: Sure I like Jessica too.

In fact, My students' time schedule was change suddenly because of a summer vacation.So I don't have say good-by.
Correct: My students' class schedule was suddenly changed because of summer vacation so I didn't have a chance to say good bye to you.

After several days we will get talked.
Correct: We will talk soon.

Any student will like you.Anyway,Mia teacher take care.^^
Correct: Any student will like you. Take care Mia.^^

Thank you. Mia teacher.. Have a blissful day.
Correct: Thank you Teacher Mia. Have a blissful day.
2012-08-15
¿ÀÈÄ 1:41:50